This is very powerful!! i love it!

So sad, great word choice. nice flow!!

keep up the good work!

So sad, great word choice. nice flow!!

keep up the good work!

This was a very deep poem. a great flow. quite powerful indeed. you choose your words very wisely. i can tell you put deep thought into every poem you write. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Hey this is a great poem i love it, you worded it great and it shows a lot of emotion too keep it up 5/5 :P

I liked your flow in this. 5/5