Comments : Electra's daughter (String senryu)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Noor,

    this is so intriguing. A character, fact or fiction, it makes no difference. Electra's beauty means nothing to her in light of her public discrace, but what is worse is the self loathing she feels for herself.

    I loved the imagery you portrayed in this write.

    Well done

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Gr8 noorie.. sad n short n sweet as it can get...

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is a very well written poem. But I just got the feeling it ends in little hurry. I feel one more stanza would have been make it complete.
    But overall the poem is fantastic.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    OK... three stanzas has been added since my last comment...
    Now it seems complete. Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    LOVELY....