by Spoken Silence Jul 21, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
** I found this which I wrote 2 years ago. Thought I would post it. ** |
by Mr. Darcy
This is an absolute gem that you have posted. The repeated 'without you I am' is so rhythmic, so enchanting and so necessary when tied in with its opposite at the poems end. Such sadness, combined with a ray of hope!! |