Hunting season (Haiku)
by Mr. Darcy Jul 21, 2008
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Caught in the gun's sight |
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1 year ago
by Linda
This is impactful with the word “extinguished”. Blown away, snuffed out, life force cooled down, iced. :(
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16 years ago
by gracey grey
A shooter with very bad eyesight shot another on the eye; what do you get then? Blinded mandoe!! LOL..Somehow I like this Haiku. Yep! I do see humor here.Forgive me, but I can't help it.
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16 years ago
by X Harlea X
Haha nice job mr.darcy.5/5
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16 years ago
by X Harlea X
Haha nice job mr.darcy.5/5
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16 years ago
Aww. :[ Poor deer. This was a wonderful haiku, keep expanding and learning new styles of poetry. :] 5/5
