Comments : Hunting season (Haiku)

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Michael, you make me cry...I can imagine this beautiful brown-eyes creture of God...Gun pointing at him....Nooo.....not my gazel....

    It is well-formed haiku...so sad....so sad...

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Aww. :[ Poor deer. This was a wonderful haiku, keep expanding and learning new styles of poetry. :] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Haha nice job mr.darcy.5/5
    **harlea

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Haha nice job mr.darcy.5/5
    **harlea

  • 16 years ago

    by gracey grey

    A shooter with very bad eyesight shot another on the eye; what do you get then? Blinded mandoe!! LOL..Somehow I like this Haiku. Yep! I do see humor here.Forgive me, but I can't help it.

  • 1 year ago

    by Linda

    This is impactful with the word “extinguished”. Blown away, snuffed out, life force cooled down, iced. :(