Comments : Tears In Your Hand

  • 16 years ago

    by Scorpio

    Sweety,
    u dont need to think about the future darling, cause as long as u cover me with ur love i'll be there 4 u 4ever & ever...

    u r everything & everything s u

  • 16 years ago

    by khobo

    Nice, nice. It's the thought that everyone has in the back of their mind, very relate-able. The third stanza is my favorite. =) In the second line of the last stanza, did you mean 'defined'? Good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good that's one lucky guy lol nicely written and had alot of emotion