Stuck Forever (Shardorma)

by Ashleigh Skye   Jul 21, 2008


Hanging there
unable to stay
or to go
I stay here
never in heaven or hell
simply just hanging.

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PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE THANKS A LOT

*Shardorma- A shadorma is a syllabic poem. It consists of 6 unrhymed lines,
syllables going: 3-5-3-3-7-5*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Nice format, it flowed good and it is easy to understand. 5/5