Comments : Falling Away With You

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This poem was kind of sad. I really liked this poem though. The wording and everything else about it was great. I gave it a 5/5. I saw nothing wrong with it. So yeah I really have nothing else to say about it.

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Powerful. i love this poem. deep, emotional, heartfelt. truly truly an amazing write.

    Thinking.
    Thinking of you.
    But you never think of me, do you?

    ^ great opening. had me sucked in.

    --lovedroughtmelody