Comments : A Game of Chance ((Love poems for the broken))

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Gabby! This poem was... wow! Absolutely genius. I think my jaw was just hanging open the entire time I was reading. Every word you typed just got through to me picture perfect. I could imagine every element of this poem inside my head. As I once said, my dear, some of the things you write do remind me of William Shakesphere. I'm holding my word too.

    What I really think broke my heart about this piece was the third stanza. Yes, what you spoke was very true. It's so relatable to every person that has a best friend over the internet. I know I can definitely relate to it. I really wish I could actually hug you too, sweetie. But just remember that someday, someday... we'll be able to. I promise.

    You wrapped up this poem so perfectly. The ending was just WOW and blew me away. I really was not expecting that. The extreme vocabulary you use still has me in awe. I love it, hun. Every line gave me chills. Great job, I'm sorry I haven't been leaving you more comments. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~