Red Umbrella

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jul 21, 2008


The last you said hello to me was on the day you died.
It all started when you went out for a rainy day ride.
The rain poured down, but you didn't care.
Of your dark fate you were unaware.

One false move and you hit a telephone pole
releasing your delicate and fragile soul.
The rain poured down along with your red blood
as the street you were on began to flood.

Forehead touching the steering wheel
in your bright red automobile.
Long, soft, brown, curly hair with light brown eyes.
An angel died under stormy gray skies.

Your once white dress now soaked in red
helped confirm on site you were dead.
A motionless girl with soft pale skin
with bruised eyes and a bloody scabbed chin.

At the funeral the makeup didn't fix your face.
The many scars you received were too hard to erase.
Wearing your red dress as the minister speaks
I'm constantly staring at your pink blushed cheeks.

I hold your red umbrella as you go under ground.
I am truly going to miss having you around.
Flowers placed upon your grave each Friday night.
I know it happens....but it doesn't feel right.

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  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    A very nice telling of this heart rending story. I know everyone wants to use all the emotion gabbing words but I think there are too many words in some of your lines and by cutting them the metre/flow of this piece would be wondeful and the feeling unchanged.
    Example:
    Your last "hello" to me was on the day you died.
    It started as you went out for that rainy day ride.
    The rain poured down, but you didn't care.
    Of your dark fate you were unaware.

    There are other places but if you agree you can find them or ask if you don't well it is just an opinion anyway.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    Wow i really liked it i hope it didnt really happen but ur very good 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    Wow i really liked it i hope it didnt really happen but ur very good 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kait

    I love all of your poems. you're such a talented writer. this one was extremely emotional. great work, as always :) 5/5