by Tangible heartache Jul 21, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A small cry escapes her sweet red lips, |
by Invited
Goodwork- I love the emphasised emotion. Your cliffhanger is really excellent. Love to see more. |
by Amber
It's an alright ending it deff is a cliffhanger which is good because now the readers have to create then ending which gets them more into the piece thinkign of what may happen. |