"The want to leave"
`Did you mean that instead of the?

"An apology is what i need yet will not receive."
`Capitolize your i's. I find it neater that way. :]

"You called me your girlfriend.
So, why hit me?
No matter, this is the end.
I am now set free."
`I really hope your boyfriend didn't really physicall hit you. That's terrible if he did. :[

Overall, a sad piece but well expressed anger. :] 5/5. Keep it up, Kait. <3

Wow !! very emotional. I think you have done a great job portraying your emotions on this relationship. Great job, keep it up.