Comments : Forgotten from the people...

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    K love this piece! Its just so deep and I totally love that about it!

    Forgotten from the people...
    My name became unknown...
    That just isn't simple...
    I can't live no more...

    I need you...
    To come here and take me to the sky...
    There's a lot things together we can do...
    If only you are mine...

    My two favorite lines in the whole poem. Excellent job! Seriously..this poem is amazing:) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Not

    This poem made me cry thinking about my ex...gd poem