Comments : On My Watch.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Good job...I like how you put the title into the end, which kind of brought it all together. But it's kinda sad how events that terrible can make such great poems...bittersweet I guess.
    Nice work!
    Take care,
    Ignoris

  • 16 years ago

    by AyaChan

    >< That was kinda sad but wonderful at the same time!*hug

  • 16 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    Really excellent poem ! i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Intense and dramatice,wow