Dance of water and light

The street is flooded by rain streams
And by tender rays of light
Every raindrop is a reflection of dreams
That are going through my mind

^^ I think these lines flaw were just the absence of punctuation marks. A very excellent descriptive way of expressing your dreams. Mind blowing lines and made me feel as if I was the one in the poem. Also, a very subtle way of expressing how beautiful the rain is.

I watch the sun slowly setting
And coloring the sky
Colorfully it is being painted
Like wings of butterfly

^^Punctuation marks or a comma I think would make this look even better. What a marvelous scene I’ve got from here. Especially, the sunset, I liked it so much and how you described it.

This beauty fills me with delight
I wish it never ends
Sparkling dance of water and light
And what I know, my friend,

^^The last line obviously made this stanza unfinished. But the third line was superb.

Is that not only my heart is
Now filled with joy and harmony
But you do feel this peaceful bliss
Of what outdoors we see

^^I think there is a needy of a comma here and a hyphen after the word IS just to indicate that the sentence was not finished. What a very lovely admiration for the beauty of nature.

That right now you're looking too
Through the window outside
That you're screwing up your eyes too
Because of playful rays of light.

^^ I dint like how you ended it, it implied somehow a negative thought which is contradicting to what the previous stanzas were trying to portray. Nevertheless how you ended it, your choice of words was very soothing and I loved the part where positive vibrant was emphasized.Great Job.5/5

Wow i've been reading alot of unique poems lately now that im depressed...
this is a really great poem.. i think it's more like a love poem to me coz there's like so much emotions put into it.. for me.. it feels like you're comparing love to the beauty of nature.. which gives off a more deeper meaning of love.... great poem!

Wow this was beautiful. absolutely lovelyy. i don't have a favorite sanza because they all are. a beautiful flow, and very expressive. i really loved it. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

I like this.
The imagery was great.

"I watch the sun slowly setting
And coloring the sky
Colorfully it is being painted
Like wings of butterfly"

^^ Favourite stanza

Keep it up

I loved every single word that you used. It was so beautiful! I thought that this poem was executed very well.