Hi Girl i found your poem to be very sad and emotional if its a true story then i sure hope you start to feel better soon , the poem itself waswell written and flowed and rhymed well

Grant

The poem is nice..In fact ,u didnt keep the rhyme but the flow was wonderful and affected the poem and made it so beautiful..besides that it's flawless ..and the language is simple ( This is the way I like),it makes u so honest...
I loved it so muchhhhhhhhhhhh...keep up the good work:)
* Hugs *

It took me one year back in the past cracked my brain and blew the old hanged feelings and being next to her again dreams slopd the tears that i was hiddin beyond my fake smiles
maked me cry again <yeah that was a real stry ana luvd it cause i was livin da same moments but da defrn is am a boy > will great job 6/6

U r d best.. n ur poems too..

N this one really touched the heart.. as It potrays love.. emotions, sadness, pain of seperation.. N yas itz not tat easy to move on with life..

To comment on this superb poem..I dont know n dont have words .. n right now poetry has died for me n I dont get a single line to compose.. think or write on this poem...

But found it 2 b so touching....

"and wherever you are now
I will love you till the end "

love till the end....it gives me wonderful feelings whenever i hear/read those words