This is soo sad! I instantly felt every emotion put in this poem. I almost cried because I know what it's like to miss someone this much.
and everyday you hurt when you don't see them.
Beautifully written. Excellent job.
You are very talented.
it flowed nicely and smoothly.
Keep on writing hun, you're amazing!

--Justina

This is a really sweet poem. a lovely dedication, if that's what it is. it had a great flow, and you simply poured your feelings out. it's a beautiful thing. it's hard to sit around and wonder what the one you love is doing. ive been there, to miss someone so bad it hurts. well, job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.