Wow... this as amazing.. keep it up

I love this poem... sometimes its hard to believe you re acually 14... Your poems are so touching.

Dear ShootingStar: Nively written for somone of your young age. I think you need to expereince real passion though, before writing about it. Passion is what love builds on. It is how you fel all the time, but expecially when you are maikng love with the one you love. Trust me. Love , Janjan xoxo

This is amazing! Very well done! Age in just a number and you prove that. Very well dun x