Comments : The Day That I Died (final chapter)

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    That was a very heart breaking write ,I got to admit when I read the other 2 parts I was thinking it was your dad who did such an awful thing to you as a child so was shocked to read that it was your mum...I could never hurt my kids in such away.Its sad that her own childhood was not such a happy one but even still that is no excuse to go on do what she did to you.You have shown such courage to write about what you went through.My thoughts are with you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Charles i have to say that the three poems in there entirety were very emotional like june i thought you were writing about your dad,and what a sad story you told. i'm glad you've found the courage to forgive even if only for your own sanity.
    very well written

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Coldstone

    Hey when i read the first two parts i too thought it was ur dad nd was shocked to find out it was ur mom! Iam amazed that u manged to forgive her after all that!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    I really like it. Your talented.