Comments : Can you see it

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Ooo, thats a pretty poem =]

    my fav part: "Can you see him put the sun to bed and carefully place the stars. As you walk home at night can you feel him holding your hand." << that was just like a really pretty sentance

    5/5 totally

    ~tia

  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua

    Thanks alot im really glad you liked it.