Happiness is around the conner

by emily mackay   Jul 22, 2008


Sometimes happiness is around the coner
but too far for us to see
sometimes we need to reach and grab it
so we can be happy
even if your having a bad day
and you feel empty and in pain
god will give you a little push
and your be as right as rain
sometimes you need that little friend
to help you along the way
sometimes god is that friend
and he saves you every day
he helps you make choices
and makes you see sense
he makes you feel calm
and not so intense
you must thank god for everything
as thats why your here today
god has a plan for you
but that he must not say
so even if your feeling down
and had a rubbish day
remember happiness is around the coner
and god will help you find it in every way!

Please comment and tell me what you think thank you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    I think this one is a rather very intriguing poem! very well done! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Such true words you wrote. Here are my thoughts:

    "Sometimes happiness is around the conner"

    conner should be corner.....change it at the end too

    "god will give you a little push
    and your be as right as rain"

    shouldn't your be you'll?

    "you must thanks god for everything
    as thats why your here today"

    thanks should be thank.......

    And I would put "for" instead of "as" in the second line.........

    "so even if your feleing down"

    feleing should be feeling......

    Overall, you did good, but you made some common errors. So just go back and fix those and otherwise this poem had a good message.

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