Such true words you wrote. Here are my thoughts:

"Sometimes happiness is around the conner"

conner should be corner.....change it at the end too

"god will give you a little push
and your be as right as rain"

shouldn't your be you'll?

"you must thanks god for everything
as thats why your here today"

thanks should be thank.......

And I would put "for" instead of "as" in the second line.........

"so even if your feleing down"

feleing should be feeling......

Overall, you did good, but you made some common errors. So just go back and fix those and otherwise this poem had a good message.

I think this one is a rather very intriguing poem! very well done! 5/5!