Comments : R.I.P Anne:(

  • 16 years ago

    by Carolina Moreno

    I love the stanzas rhyme..!! is awesome
    I really love this poem...
    you get all the support from me...!!
    in this cases people need to be really strong...just remember she will always be by your side..!!

  • 16 years ago

    by xLeftxBehindx

    Cancer filled her lungs,
    Made it hard to breathe,
    One night the angels came,
    And said she had to leave.

    I really like that analogy it has a lot of
    imagery in it

    good write I'll give 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal

    Wow that was an awesome poem!! it made me cry hehe

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Im sorry for ur loss :( this poem has good rymeing and rythem i loved it 5/5