This is so touchable..That girl got a lot of pain in her heart and she lost everything..That is so sad..
But sure someday this pain will fade away..
I loved the poem,it is well-written and the flow was good..
Keep up the good work..

This is so sad! made me want to cry because of all the pain that girl must have felt, the feeling of being torn, and then she loses everything. So sad. Hopefully she ends with a happily ever after. It's always like a stab to the heart to see someone else with the one you truely care about. AMAZING!! Cheers to your amazing writing.

Wow...I love this poem. The emotions are so real. I feel like you open up your heart and just let your true feeling pour onto the paper. This was so deep and moving. I love the imagery. Wow... Keep it up hun. You got talent. Shanik