by Goth marionette Jul 23, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Let's talk about the real art, |
by Yeka
Wow I have nothing to say it really was an awsome poe mlove it (^_^) keep up the wonderful like you are doing right now (^_^) |
Very well wrote visuals where very good throughout yet I feel like the rhymes where forced on some parts like monsters and gamesters its follows some rules of rhyming yet it sounds off like that maybe another word like ponders would have fit better still a good write though |
I really love this poem, it has such a meaning that I think others, including me, understand. Great descriptions and this poem is so powerful and filled with emotion. You really captured the horror and descruction of all thats going on. Nice work, thank you for your comment, its greatly appreciated. Keep writing, always and forever. |
by Ixora
I love this poem! its amazing n the imagry is beautiful! you're an amazing poet! 5.5 |
I am absolutely speechless!!! |