Flows perfectly..a very beautiful piece although filled with sad emotions..You managed to focus til end.. The idea was so vivid..Good work..

I never really got the message, nor pictiture in this write.? I think it sounded more like a story, than a poem. But, its a unique way of writing, and that I like.
Dollface.

Oh man thanks alot, now i can't stop thinking about my stupid ex :) good write, can totally relate which makes it even better, keep it up!