I loved this! It was so different and quite appealing. The story was easy to follow and I found myself wanting more when it was finished. The hint of sarcasm was very clever and the imagery was easily painted in my mind throughout reading this.

"So why don't you slide that ego off,
And check it at the door tonight."

^love, Love, LOVED it! So unique and written beautifully.

The flow here was just flawless and the poem as a whole was interesting to read.

Well done.
*5/5*