Comments : Paint it Black

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I had to look at this one because it is one of my favorite titles lol I like what you did with it, though I am not sure I like the repeat of the word stupid in the opening and last lines, I might change one of them. All in all though I like the feeling behind this poem, I think we have all found ourselves in this kind of moment at some point in time. Nice work