Awww cute poem hun. he must be so proud and happy. you have a true talent.5/5
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Aww. This was so beautiful and cute it almost made me cry. It really sucks to hear that things aren't working out at the moment with you and him.. but just hang in there sweetie. Things may get better, or you may break up. But there's always hope for everything. This poem was extremely amazing though, you expressed your feelings very amazingly and this was truly written from your heart. Well done. 5/5. (:

Beautiful! amazing! i love it! you put so much heart in it. you have a way with words. keep it up! =)

OMG what a lovely poem. You are very talented = )

Very touching!
You have an awesome way of letting your emotions form into those beautiful words...
Thanks!

Beautiful poem! Thats really all I can say!

This is really great poem...I loved it...