OMG! This is such a powerful write. I have absolutely no words to say, just speechless at the moment. It was so deeply sad and yet the pain and torture of the girl struck through from the start. Amazing piece that deserves all the praise that can be showered!

Very dark though it's not ur best..
My favorite part is when U wrote that when U talked to God,Satan spoke back.I liked the meaning behind it..
Good job,plz keep it up..