I liked the poem, I found that all the questions made such affect of depth. But I think all the questions as in the whole poem just asking questions I think it made it a bit repetitive and could have had more effect if there was probably a break in between the questions... I think this poem could be developed further and really turned into something special..but for now it is a good starting point. It has a nice feel to it, something about this poem makes it seem so...honest and open, also giving it a little fed up effect.

Well nice work, keep it up, hope some of my suggestions help.