Wow.
this has so much emotion in it.
wow.
im speechless.
very touching poem.
very sad also :(
well done.xx

Damn.. This is terrible im so sorry this happened to you... Rapp is such a terrible thing and i know from experience it is hard to deal with i cant image if i had a child because of it that must of been so hard.. You are very brave and i respect you for all you've been threw im so sorry about your friend.. If you ever wanna talk im here

That was the most amazing,touching,horrible thing i have ever read..i hope everything is ok and i am sooo sorry for your losses..5/5 though very good....

Wow...and you say im good....i really don't know what to say...5/5

if you ever need to talk, im here for ya beautiful

This is very sad. reading this gave me chills. i'm so sorry this happened to you.

That was extremely sad..Im sorry bout everythin..the image was elaborated well...very well written actually although filled with deep sadness and horrible experiences..Im sorry bout the baby and ur friend..be strong..xDD

This is such an intense poem.. the words you used where perfect to describe the emotion. it gave me chills. this poem had me glued to my laptop screen from start to finish. the horrible image it painted on my mind was simply what a true poet's poetry would do to the reader...
take care sezz...=)

Wow, i almost cried while reading this. I really liked this, there was so much eotion in it. And I, like everyone else, and deeply sorry for this tragic happening. I can slightly empathize (sp?). But nonetheless it was extremely good.