Our love is lost, our love is dead

by halie   Jul 23, 2008


Our love is lost,
our love is dead
it starts to sink
in my head
as i shed one last tear
for the year
i look in the mirror
i see a mistake
i look at you picture
i see perfection
am i really suppose to feel this way?
you look in the mirror
you see perfection
you look at my picture
you see a mistake
whats the difference
our love is lost
our love is dead
i can't believe,
i believed what you said..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Dude love the ending its awsome 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyndz

    I liked the edn of this

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    As i shed one last tear
    for the year
    --it seems so final now it add somthing to the poem good choice

    so many girls will be able to relate to your writing great job! 5/5 <33