by Emilia Jun 3, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I'm a lonely girl |
I definately know how you feel in this poem...I would die if I had to live without the man I love...anyways I gotta jet the bell just rang for 5th period....keep up the good work Much Love JJ |
by ** JeNa **
good job, i felt the same way about my bf when we broke up but we're back 2gether now, well newayz good job, keep writting, i hope to read more of ur work |
by Luke
it was a good poem, but the topic is used so much that i would have liked to have seen some kind of original flair. i know you can do that, ive read some of your other stuff. peacee |
by Kris Lynn
I thought that the overall meaning was very well expressed but i think that sometimes poems are best when they are not completely to the point. The poem itself was written wonderfully and flowed very well. |
by Vanessa
hey thx 4 reading my poems! I think this is one of my fav. poems that u have writtin! It's emotional and i hope to checkout any new poems u write |