Comments : Musical Notes~Senryu

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A wise Senryu in harmony with the mind heart and soul of a poet
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    A nice write. The word usage was not as intense as the other poem I read but perhaps this style was a bit more taxing to produce. Still a good write.
    As always an opinion

  • 16 years ago

    by Empathy

    I found it simple and agreeable to understand. I really think that you have an opportunity to enhance the detail of "Life is like music" but with the the poem being in a form, I still like what you've done with it. Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    This is like a "life is like a box of chocolate" quote. however what separates this from that is you used the theme of music. more people can relate to such a theme in the aspect a lot of people possibly everyone i think enjoys some time of music. and useing the term life like music and the notes as situations that may bring you down. was wonderful. very understanding<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Well said and so true.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    So true and so simple..
    Just a wise saying written in 3 lines perfectly..
    I really loved it so muchhhhhhhhhhhh...
    Good job,plz keep it up5/5..

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal

    Musicians can relate. I like this simple work... Pretty amazing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Life is like learning to play music. It is hard, however with determination and enough support from loved ones, one can create a symphony!!

    Well done

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    The Senryu form is excellent in that it forces the writer to use few words to make a point or convey meaning and you have succeeded in doing that. Very well written, good job.