A wise Senryu in harmony with the mind heart and soul of a poet |
by H E Losey
A nice write. The word usage was not as intense as the other poem I read but perhaps this style was a bit more taxing to produce. Still a good write. |
by Empathy
I found it simple and agreeable to understand. I really think that you have an opportunity to enhance the detail of "Life is like music" but with the the poem being in a form, I still like what you've done with it. Nice work. |
This is like a "life is like a box of chocolate" quote. however what separates this from that is you used the theme of music. more people can relate to such a theme in the aspect a lot of people possibly everyone i think enjoys some time of music. and useing the term life like music and the notes as situations that may bring you down. was wonderful. very understanding<3 |
Well said and so true. |
So true and so simple.. |
by Crystal
Musicians can relate. I like this simple work... Pretty amazing. 5/5 |
by Mr. Darcy
Life is like learning to play music. It is hard, however with determination and enough support from loved ones, one can create a symphony!! |
by Sylvia
The Senryu form is excellent in that it forces the writer to use few words to make a point or convey meaning and you have succeeded in doing that. Very well written, good job. |