Comments : Editor

  • 16 years ago

    by Empathy

    A great poem! Your style of writing felt very familiar to me. I like how you question the reader with the basis of genesis. I felt that several of the stanzas circulated some of their own meanings. A thought provoking take on the truth of variability. Excellent work.

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    The rymes are easy to follow and understand. short poem. but nice theme that stands out. well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wishmaster

    Very good! And very clever!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    A thoughtful and intelligent poem. Enjoyable to read.

  • 16 years ago

    by LilBit

    Great Poem,
    It Makes So Much Sense,
    Good Job. 5/5!