Comments : His house

  • 16 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    Last two lines are great

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww i'm so sorry you're going through a rough time.

    always here for you, and great poem, it truly came from the heart. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    This is a great poem.
    if its real im sorry.
    you are very good at poems good luck :)

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    This poem tells such a sad story, im sorry for you
    hope things get better

  • 16 years ago

    by XoXoBriannaoXoX

    Wow!!! that is wow!!! its a great poem....
    who is this a father or a boyfriend??

  • 16 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    I feel ya on this poem..i have one similar to this..kinda a love hate relationship..lol
    but i thought this was very good..5/5