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  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow !!hey don't bottle up ur feelng ur emotions cuz they turn bad in the end. trust me i hold in and it's.. ya well Great job in this poem. keep it up =)

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    That was.....amazing. It was so deep. It wasn't the normal cutting poem. It was more about the cause than most I've seen. Great job! 5/5

    Which it always reminds me,
    that the knife knows me,
    knows how I care,
    and plead for joy,

    But she dont know,
    and understand why,
    so as I grab this knife,
    and cut my wrist,

    I will always remember,
    that You caused This.

    ^^Fave part.