Beyond The Realms Of Reality

by BlueEyedMystery   Jul 24, 2008


Step through the incandescent light,
of a door that holds a magical place.
Blinded by a world drenched in color,
outlined with silk ribbons and lace.

Trees engulfed in apricot-emerald,
the sky painted in violet streaks,
a horizon torched in an orange glow,
like a sunset that goes on for weeks.

Rose petals ride on a tepid breeze,
bringing the scent of your childhood.
A past that was cut short of it's time,
one that you never quite understood.

A thick ribbon of river slices through,
it's gentle rhythm tranquil and steady.
A boat floats idle off to the far side,
waiting patiently, when you're ready.

Blades of grass turn to butterflies,
with just a slim touch from your hand.
Orange-blue fire doesn't bite or sting,
from candles burning in the sand.

Blossoms spill down like raindrops,
to melt and sparkle in your hair.
A lullaby is playing in the distance,
one that your mother use to share.

Eat the berries that have fallen,
and you'll never be allowed to leave,
but who would possibly want to,
when you can be blissful and naive?

So open your heart and step inside,
reveal your desires to this realm,
dance with the fairies, twirling around,
let the fantasy and illusion overwhelm.

` This was inspired by a book that I read.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is so beautifully written... I gives such a feel-good feeling... motivating to remove all our inhibitions and be carefree and happy... like we used to be when we were kids...

    such a refreshing read... the word choice is beautiful.. the imagery is wonderful..

    great work.. keep writing... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Sounds like a place I want to be in. Good word flow and image.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lakota

    OMG!!! The imagery was FANTASTIC!!! Every detail, it was...wooooow!!!! 10/5 man^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    This was extremely well written! I loved the imagery in it, it completely brought my imagination to life. The title also grabbed my attention, so a very nice choice on it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KN

    Wow. I don't think I'll be able to help you out because I love it the way it is. Incredibly descriptive, nice flow. The images you create seem very soft and mystical. And I would have to agree with Empathy that the last line seems just right to sort of pull it to an end with a subtle abruptness (sorry if that doesn't make sense).

    Good job. 5/5

    PS. I'm curious to know what book you read that inspired this poem.

More Poems By BlueEyedMystery