Invisible Heartache

by Savannah Kate   Jul 24, 2008


Knee deep in emotions,
Hidden to where no one can see
Buried deep beneath the oceans
I don't know why...its just me.

People just don't understand,
This pain I feel inside,
No one will lend me a hand
So I just hide.

Hide my face, hide my scars
Hide my life, hide my heart
Just dwell in the stars
And never ever part...

Unseen to everyone
Even though my life is at stake
So i guess I'll just take a gun
To my invisible heartache...

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  • 16 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Well done i enjoyed this poem alot it was very expressive and had a nice rhyme scheme keep up the good work! :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Ash

    Aww what a sad poem

    So i guess I'll just take a gun
    To my invisible heartache...
    Thats so Sad aww

  • 16 years ago

    by OmniLotus

    5/5 I genuinly enjoyed this poem you wrote because Ive felt the same way at a certain point but other than that good poem and i shall be reading more of yours

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    This poem was wonderful. I believe a lot of us can relate to it. Well done and keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Eikel ARCANGEL Cespedes

    Wow an amazing poem, it was really awesome you put so much description and feeling into it literally blew me away GREAT JOB

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