by Cristian Teo Regalado Jul 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Yes Olga you've gone and left us, |
by Megan
Very good im sorry for your loss! |
by Sarah
So powerful! I hope you too are doing well. It really sucks loosing some one. I think about how I'll get to see my Uncle John again some day and that helps me get by. |
It was excellent i mean i could feel sense ur emotion! iam sorry, lifes not fair but ur pain will not b in vain. my rest in peace now and foreva |
Very powerful, and the repitition worked wonderfully in this poem, it flowed perfectly and the rhyme scheme worked aswell, great poem for a two year writers block. Sorry about your mother, may she rest in peace. |