Comments : Barely breathing

  • 16 years ago

    by Teresa

    It's not a poem..just a writing splurge i felt at the moment...:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Diana

    I enjoyed this poem or writing splurge. somehow the way you expressed yourself made me feel the hurt that you felt. Maybe because i can't get over it as well. However, i rated your writing with a 5.