Just For Fun

by charles   Jul 24, 2008


Old man
Young pretty girl
Get together each night
To say thinking of you
How was your day
Are you there
She smiles

* This started out as a Haiku
At least that was my wish
But when things entered my head
It turned into pure gibberish~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    I have found it very interesting. I wouldn't say it's a bad piece. Rather it's very good by it's own way. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey charles nice one has a sentimental ring to it , well written

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Well I like it OH BUT your not an old man if you are talking about your self. Not old man mister lol. But I love this .

    One day I may just try to write a haiku

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