Written In Crimson

by WaitAutumn   Jul 24, 2008


Guilt blacken my tears
Tenaciously caressing my face
As they fall among my disgrace
They are but the words i cannot say

A promise written in crimson
One i shall not withstand
My love bleeding from my hand
Crave my heart with your request

It's too late to apologize
I asked to be forgiven
Instead you have given,
Me a second chance

-never believed in forever-

- when the one you loved passes away, forgives you by giving you someone else to love..-

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  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is very good i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    A promise written in crimson
    One i shall not withstand
    My love bleeding from my hand
    Crave my heart with your request

    This is my favorite stanza...the way u expressed ur feelings was so impressive n simple...
    Keep up the good work..

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I agrere more then you think abo0ut these , i am very sure that love , is iternal , even when the one died , i can still feel her blessing and ehr love in my bones,even i met another love in my life i can still feel her in me !!!

    great great i love this one !!