by Mister 47 Jul 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
On the road , in the funeral , all the people gather on the sides |
by Sourav
It's a little strange kind of poem. I liked the description. A very good imagery you've painted. Interesting write. |
by HvN
This is really catchy lol, the ryme is super nice! |
The third "stanza" was a bit strange seeing how the rest had two extra lines, but if I just read the poem as a whole it's fine. |