The third "stanza" was a bit strange seeing how the rest had two extra lines, but if I just read the poem as a whole it's fine.

Other than that it was really good. You captured the imagery nicely and the ending was great.

It captured nicely what it's like to go to a funeral.

This is really catchy lol, the ryme is super nice!

5/5

It's a little strange kind of poem. I liked the description. A very good imagery you've painted. Interesting write.