This was a really good poem, written really well, and the emotions within portrayed perfectly like many other people have said. i can see how hard this must have been to write so well done...keep your head up :) x

The flow of this was awesome, i liked how you went from year to yea, explaining the changes you were going through, and the ending was definetly great. Your hard work paid off in this peice!! keep it up!! 5/5

Wow. Very powerful piece here. I enjoyed the words and emotions you used. It was very sad and I'm so sorry but you did a great play on the beginning of each stanza. You have true talent

Holy blankin goodness. that was freakin awsome. I mean, if i could give you more that 5/5 i would, it deserves it high votage.

Xcellent poem, i am very sorry you had to experience this, and i know that time will never heal all your wounds. I have a similar story it on this site entitle Loving A Monster, check it out. Good luck

This poem is absolutely beautiful and I am sure a lot of people will be able to relate to this as I was. This wasn't only a poem but a story, and a well written one at that.

I love this poem how you put dear before every stanza was good i like that alot

Hello Angel tears, I am so sorry to read what I have just read, what you had to endure is the shame is on your parents not on you, they must have seen how he was treating you, and stopped it long before. So lift your head, hold it high, look your brother right in the eye, and tell him that he is too blame, and that if he does not admit to his evil ways with you, his boys will be doomed to the very same thing, maybe not the sexual molestation but to the abuse that you suffered through. no to comment on your concept in your poem, it is unique to do it in this way, but I enjoyed it. keep up the good work