Is it war? or just a genocide? maybe neither... maybe both

by Dustin Walters   Jul 24, 2008


The skies turn dark and the mist flies in
He is longing for them and will surely win
Win the battle of a long lost love, finally found...
Win the battle of a new friendship, cast in ground!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I mean no disrepect, and I am certain you can find many an author on here who will tell you I never have a bad word to say about a poem unless it's constructive, but: what does the title have to do with the verse, and don't you think you've cut it all just a little bit short?

    Please accept my apologies if this is a "work in progress", but it's come up in my keyword search for "war" as a new poem.