by Dustin Walters Jul 24, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
other
The skies turn dark and the mist flies in |
I mean no disrepect, and I am certain you can find many an author on here who will tell you I never have a bad word to say about a poem unless it's constructive, but: what does the title have to do with the verse, and don't you think you've cut it all just a little bit short? |