Comments : Love Isn't Imaginary

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    Very. very nice poem. The only flaw i found was here:

    Let go off emotions set them free to intervene

    I believe you meant "of" and not off. Otherwise, a very very beautiful piece. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Justin

    Again great poem with just one error ( which might not even be but ) what angel tear pointed out... still good poem and you can feel emotions from the poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Annaam

    Good one! . . . . Really sweet 8)

  • 16 years ago

    by Scorpio

    Love it sweety,

    wooooow,

    thats really wonderfull,,,
    sweety pie,,
    m speechless my love u just everything n my heart..

    i love u so much & with every breath i take my love 2 u grows more & more..

    :-*

  • 16 years ago

    by VSambulance

    I really liked it. Especially this part:

    Our love song may never be found out
    It's the only rhythm learned by our hearts.

    You said you usually write sad poems, but you're quite good at love poems as well.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    Definitely an amazing poem.

  • Is nice one. keep it up .

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Ash

    Such a well expressed poem Extra job well done
    KEEP IT UP :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    'It's the only rhythm learned by our hearts'

    But not everyone can transfer the It's the rhythm learned by our hearts as you have done hear in this flawless flow

    amazing!!
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Love is not just imaginary coz its a reallity!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem has a nice messege.
    I loved the choosing of words in this poem which made it easy to understand the meaning.
    There weren't rhymes, but specificly in this piece, the flow was great from begining to end. I could imagine all of your descriptions and metaphores you used.
    Nicce job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow
    really adorable
    yea love isn't imaginary
    i loved your poem alot

    my favorite part:
    "Love isn't imaginary
    For even in my sleep I experience love
    In the depth of my dreams you never leave
    Fighting the distance not to play a part

    Goodnight kisses and sweet dreams hugs
    Let go of emotions, set them free to intervene
    No matter what kind of world were in at this time
    Even if it's just a game, I don't mind"

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this poem really blew me away, it was great. very deep so pure and heartfelt. you are truly wonderful at expressing your emotions. you have a great talent.

    Love letters may fade away in time
    Yet every thought i've ever penned
    Are echoes from my admiring heart
    Vividly, your images comes into sight

    that stanza was a perfect opening, i loved it. especially the 3rd line, very creative. keep writing, i love your work. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem is amazing... the feelings that were put into it shine beautifully throughout the whole poem. Not to mention the way you wrote it so poetically swept me off my feet.

    "Fighting the distance not to play a part"
    ^^ This line meant the most to me. Because it shows an angle very rarely used and it's worded beautifully.

    I'm astonished by this poem. It really makes me wish I was the one who wrote it because I felt every line and this is definitely my style.

    Beautiful write, keep it up! 5/5 for sure...

  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    Most love poem end up cliche, just another kind of fuzzled up imitation of the others. Yet you were able to take the idea of love, think about it adding your own personal flare.

    "Kiss me like you never kissed anyone before
    Love isn't imaginary, love is you and me "

    ^This stanza jumped out at me. The ending was wonderfully written, wrapped up this poem wonderfully. I love how you used the common saying people are saying, Love is imaginery. It doesn't exist. You used it, changed it for a wonderful ending. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sora

    A beautiful write indeed! a very expressive piece. i really liked this! and i like the title, always good to have an eye catching title.

    Love letters may fade away in time
    Yet every thought i've ever penned
    Are echoes from my admiring heart
    Vividly, your images comes into sight

    this stanza was creative and touching, and especially since it was the first one it made me want to keep going. that's a lovely thing to write something that makes the reader want to keep going. i've read several of your poems, you have a wonderful talent. excellent job. 5/5

    -Ashlei

  • 14 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Awww that was beautiful lol i loved it