Untold story

by suicide once again   Jul 24, 2008


Why did you tell me that you cared for me
when it was a lie
why did you come back to me
just to hurt me again
why is that you made me this way
why did you do this to me
i wanted everything for you
i wanted to give you everything and then more
you pushed me so far away that i couldn't see you
every time i got close you moved away
i wanted to make thing better
you made things worse
i told you the truth
you lied to me
i gave up
you wanted more
dude make up your mind
what do you want
when i caught you on your lies
you told me to shut up
you wanted me to talk
but when i did you ignored me
you watched me go through pain
inside you were laughing
i looked you in the eye
and told you i would do anything to be with you
you took it and used it against me
how dare you treat me tis way
how could you lie to me
what is your problem
i care
you hate
guess what you messed up big
and now watch your back
and the next time you tell someone that you want me back
ill remind you that you are done with me
screw me over ... shame on me
do it again ill mess you up

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  • 16 years ago

    by SimplyEclipse

    This is a great poem...its heavy...i felt it... I like that

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Angel

    Great poem. i do want to give you a tip though. the last line "do it again and ill mess you up" put in a different way, like "the next mistake you make, karma will be your fate" or something in that matter. Just a little help. But other than that, it was a fantastic poem, i really felt the way you did by reading, i could relate to it and understand what your were meaning. so i think it was fantastic. KEep on writing. GREAT JOB!
    Silent angel*